I decided to play around with the scale of the image in the water. Also experimenting with the use of light as I've looked at light a little in my previous work,

I think the light really adds to the atmosphere of this image. I also think the scale has worked more successfully as it has made it more intimate. 

Heres a colour of the image more clearly.

I think it would work really well if I combined the idea of creating a book and the water together.